English is my second language, I know how it feels to want to say something and don't have the words. Yet, I can understand the criticism about making clearer the ideas. Maybe the brother was a little rude in explaining that.

I have to say, i myself was desenrouraged to read the text because of the absence of ponctuation, and this is fundamental to understand other persons ideas. I think is a good idea to practice the art of writing to another person and not for you.

However, I liked your remarks and i wouldn't exclude a brother because he has a limitation, but would show him how to make better.

One Love,

Ras Mandingo - Brasil.